i think the animation was good but still could could be improved by spending more time on the animation part making it smoother and improving the way the story is told that that it is easier to understand.
i think the feedback that i received was good and with most of the comments going in one direction helping me find out what to improve.
the way that i would improve my animation would be by thinking of a way to tell the story easier so that a wider audience could understand it. if i ever make a new animation i will use this feedback to improve the animation

Finished animation

OH you pocco

Timeline of developments in animation

mah stop motion animation

i have made my models using plaster and got the material for my back drop next week kev will be bringing in the pirate ship that i am using and i shall start my animaton